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I created you, so wonderful, so beautiful.
I loved you.
You were so beautiful...
Before I knew it, I was drowning in the the illusion of you.

What should I call this? The illusion?
The future I think of is grey, the words I hear are also.
Please let me hear your voice. let me hold you and touch you.
oh, that's right, you're just a dream.

But you can at least hold me there.

Eternity stopped it's breathe slightly and let me go into despair...

Yet I hear your voice. But it's mocking me, telling me; "laugh a little more,you should pray harder."
you would never say that to me. It's a false voice I'm hearing.
if I can't hear your true voice, then kill me.
I won't leave any evidence.
I'll burn and bury this canvas of lies.
Both you and me.
Burn me then kill me.

The picture is not mine. It's probably from NicoNico.

anyway, I listened to the song of this and I really enjoyed it and, it was only until after listening to it for so long, that I realized, I was in the mind set of it.

so, my thoughts were thinking of all these scenes and lyrics from the songs and I put them into a poem as I listened to the song..

I hope you enjoy it.
[link]<--- where the inspiration came from.
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oh! Luka's song, isn't it? I love this song! And your translate is cute and so sad. =') Thanks for this translation! :D
Crystalmoon234 Aug 27, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
yes! it is her song! I know right!? it's one of my favorites!
and thank you! although, it's not really my translation, the person who translated it translate a lot of videos really nicely. :D
SapphireAion Jul 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
That's really pretty! :heart:
Crystalmoon234 Jul 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
aw thank you! really, pretty?! I'm glad! XD
SapphireAion Jul 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome, and it's true! :D :clap:
Crystalmoon234 Jul 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
yay! thank you Ru~! >3<
SapphireAion Jul 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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